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But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" *, Lincoln: It's not fair. They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. Do I mean nothing to you? There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. Lincoln: Okay. Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! loud. And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" You are about as braindead as you're heartless! "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". Rita: Lincoln?! (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? Plot. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? His choreography is so dated. Luan added. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! (he goes to the living room window. [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I got to find somewhere to hide! (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. I guess this proves it! Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. He managed to, but with a twist. "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. I hate clowning! You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! Thats what my problem is! If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. "Well mom, you know what I think?" Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! We didn't find any though." I hate softball! turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! I know you would never label me bad luck, and youd never neglect me. We feel so ashamed! So we've been in here trying to pass the time. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! WE'RE BRUTES!!! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. helluvaboss. I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. Luna. I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. I'm not. Not you or Lucy. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. Lincoln: (tearful) No! (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Some sisters those ghouls are. "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" Lucy: Lincoln's right! Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! Just a head's up. And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. I am bad luck! I dont want to support you psychos! "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. Right now." Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! Spell it out alt ending7. ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. Everyone finally realized that what they've done. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. I MESSED UP!!! "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. +7 more. (They keep searching the house. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. I was being a sore loser! After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. Anyway, here's my fanfiction. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. But seriously, we made a mess of everything! Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud were in the spa, trying to get their minds off the trouble their kids caused yesterday. Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Trivia. Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. ", (and that did it. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Lock 'n' Loud / The Whole Picture. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Brawl in the family alt ending8. That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. "YOU HEARD HER!" Theres no need to shout. @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" My own family, locking me out. but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. Lincoln: If they're so nuts, I can't be near my family. First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). The important thing is that we learn from them. I even threatened you to go to my game! *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Lincoln: I said NO! But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. Lucy. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! And Lori and Lisa. After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. We need it! Then, he opened it up. Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! Not a loud alt ending6. I have failed as a human being. We were given the room." Even Ronnie Anne was there too. "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. The Princess and the Everlasting Emerald: A Royal Woods Fairytale. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Maybe I should just quit the team. Lori said. What's going on here?! I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. This proves it. lincoln. Luna put. "Hotel security came up to the room?!" Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. (Raises his fist at her). Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. No pun intended. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! So, I plan to rectify that. Learn more. "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. One of the Boys alt ending4. But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. Lori yelled. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. Im sick of everything thats happened to me! Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). ", Luna: "No, you were right. (Bursts into tears). *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! Angus: Oh do tell. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. Look, I see sweaty footprints! Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! "Same here." While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" I tried to make it as comical as i could. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. You can never come back. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. And I HATE LEECHES!" Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! You tricked us in the first place. "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Lincoln: No! Even more computer typing was heard but soon afterward the woman on the other going, "Hhhmmmm.," was also heard. Dont threaten your little sister! ), Lincoln: But you know what!? YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? (Tears up) Our only bro. Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? Lucy: Lincoln, stop! Now, let me make this clear! I'm not bad luck. Ruthless People extended ending13. Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. NOTHING!! Guess they forgot to lock the windows. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" Hope you enjoy. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. You kicked me out of your lives, now I'm kicking you all out of mine!! Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. Luan brought it. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! Luna: That was rockin'. The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. Need i remind you looneys that its against the law to not shelter one of your own and what am i supposed to do now that all my belongings are gone!? "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. I would feel awful if you did. I hate this stupid beach! Journal. [The softball playoffs. You love baseball. I hate concerts! Start talking. SQUIRRELS WIN! Thats not how it works! Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. My first story is done. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Just because of superstitions?! Lincoln asked his parents. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. Slow down Lynn! I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? Now we've broken the shower." "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . "Not cool, guys." But dont worry, youre still a great writer. MY TROPHIES!!! Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. Hahahaha! They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. N Eddy's big picture show . Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! What do you think, Pep? It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? Also, her kids weren't wrong about the pudding, that stuff was so vile it would turn her stomach into a BMX dirt track for days, so the kids' decision had its positives after all. (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! We wont! Lisa: Easy, easy! (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! Lori finished with. She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Lola: Hey, Lincoln . Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" A Happy Ending New Reading List. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Lincoln: You know what!? ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. ", (the sisters cheers. Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" Rita: Sweetie, please! Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. She pointed to the back row of seats. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Why? He really doesn't like us at all does he? Tell the community what's on your mind. "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that.